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Lamentation
Lamentation Lamentation written May 25th, 2021 I want to weep for all those lost I rend my garments for those without hope I tear at my hair for those in pain now I bow my head for those who will hurt (which is all of us) my lamentation sings out so they know they are not alone my words rise up as my tears spill down onto the page let my tears - this lamentation purchase a moment of relief from the<b> gods </font></b>for the lost, without hope hurting and in pain the gift of one deep sweet breath filled with peace. |
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Presumptuous of me, but I would if I could, make this grief be worth something to someone.
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I like your poetry
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Hi there Senfully! Wow you hit it out of the park again. I really like the last stanza: the gift of one deep sweet breath filled with peace. Love the analogy of a breath filled with peace... and of course being sweet too! *whispering into your ear* you are worth it all! hugs my friend!
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Your words are very descriptive. Very nice!!
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Very appropriate for Memorial Day!!! I liked it!!!
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this is so true. wishing better days for all of us
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Beautifully written. *. *. *
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